Friday, October 16, 2009

Outline for CC + CE

Cause-and-effect essay:Why some students can get good grades?

Thesis statement:
A student can get a high score because he/she takes perfect notes, previews and reviews in time, uses office hours efficiently.

Topic sentence 1:
A student who takes notes including clear guidelines and many useful details can get high score because perfect notes help them study well.
1.A clear guideline not only wakes memories of what teacher said in the class but systematize knowledge you have learnt.
2.Details make you better understand the knowledge.

Topic sentence 2:
Previewing makes students be familiar with textbook and reviewing helps students enhance their memory.
1.After preview, you have expectation of what will be taught during class.
2.Reviewing impress your memory.

Topic sentence 3:
Using office hours efficiently leads to excellent homework and health.
1.Doing homework efficiently
2.Manage time and have a good rest

Compare-and-contrast essay:Desktop vs. laptop

Thesis statement:
There are many similarities and differences between desktop and laptop concerning appearance, purpose, and price.

Topic sentence 1:
Despite desktop and laptop both are computers, their appearance are dissimilar.
1.Laptop is smaller than desktop.
2.Both laptop and desktop have the same components such as display screen, CPU, keyboard and so on.

Topic sentence 2:
The use of desktop is similar with that of laptop in most cases, however, in some case, they are different because of their distinct function.
1.Using desktop and laptop watch movie, listen music, study,
2.Laptop is smaller and more convenient to bring so it’s good for business and students, however, desktop is bigger and more stable so it has excellent display screen for us watching movie and enough RAM to play online games.

Topic sentence 3:
Compare with desktop, laptop is more expensive with the same configuration.
1.Because laptop need more integrated than desktop, laptop is more expensive.
2.It’s hard to make laptop work as well as desktop meanwhile in a smaller shape.

1 comment:

  1. Maple, I like both outlines above, so choose either one of them that you like. The C&C outline seems to be more informative than the C&E outline. I think those two outlines are all set, so go ahead and start to work on it. If you have any problems, let me know. :)

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